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April 19, 2011 by Saurabh Gupta

Some day I hope, you won’t be there alone,
you won’t miss me and I won’t miss you!
on your birthday, and life’s each day,
I could see you, touch you and kiss you!

Some day I hope, we’d walk along the shores,
holding hands, all alone, just me and you!
amidst the moonlight and music of waves,
and in my ear, you’d whisper a secret or two!

Some day I hope, to share my solitude,
I won’t have just the cold side of the bed!
some day I hope, at the daybreak, I find myself awake,
next to the woman I love instead!

Some day I hope, I’ll get you back,
from the destiny, fighting the odds together!
because I could conquer the world,
with one hand, if you’re holding the other!

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on April 19, 2011 at 1:08 am | Reply Lalit Jain

Very Nicely Written…shows the pain in your heart and the hope to get back your loved one…
- on April 19, 2011 at 1:29 am | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks Lalit… glad you liked it..
on April 19, 2011 at 12:22 pm | Reply Mrinal Kumar

Nice one Saurabh! Keep it up.

In my opinion, hope and prayer are 2 very beautiful things in this world which always keep us moving, despite all the hurdles. Hope and prayer are 2 assets which always keep us closer to the Almighty and gives us a purpose for life! These are the qualities which gives us the strength to dare to dream and then make that dream a reality.

My wishes are with you. Keep up your hope and whatever be it that you wish for will definitely come true!!!

Once again, very nice poem!!!
- on April 19, 2011 at 12:45 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thank you Mrinal. Totally agree with you.. Hope and Prayer do give us inner strength to keep moving ahead in life..
on April 19, 2011 at 12:58 pm | Reply Himakshi

Brilliant piece…ppl say feelings cant b put in words but u prove them wrong wid watever u write…simply love it :) hope u soon find the one u love so much :)
- on April 19, 2011 at 1:06 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks Himakshi, really appreciate your saying that. :)
on April 19, 2011 at 2:35 pm | Reply Arvind

achi hai… specially last two lines

coz I could conquer the world..,
with one hand, if you’re holding the other..!
- on April 19, 2011 at 2:43 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks Arvind.
on April 19, 2011 at 6:20 pm | Reply Mahima Gupta

Really good one yar CB!!!!

You have a unique quality of expressing ur feeling in words lyk dis which very less people have!!!!

plz continue to write lyk dis!!!!

Last 2 lines are awesome!!!!! loved it….
- on April 19, 2011 at 6:47 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Well… glad that you appreciate it Mahima.
on April 22, 2011 at 11:51 pm | Reply Bhagyashree

Nice one!!
- on April 23, 2011 at 4:11 am | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks..
on April 25, 2011 at 4:26 pm | Reply chetan

i just want to say beautiful poem! you have given me much to think about today.
- on April 25, 2011 at 8:57 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Well.. nothing left for me to think about anymore.. guess should be the same for you as well..
on April 25, 2011 at 11:27 pm | Reply lavanya

Hey Saurabh, very well written.
A few corrections would be not to use “..” and use “, ” and try not to use coz or shortcuts,it kind of snaps the beauty.Too romantic these days huh :P keep it going :)
- on April 25, 2011 at 11:30 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks for the inputs Lavanya! Will keep in mind. :)
on April 27, 2011 at 8:52 pm | Reply Sudeep

first awesome lines in hindi and now in english… :)

really beautiful one..
- on April 27, 2011 at 9:10 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks sudeep..
on September 13, 2011 at 4:57 pm | Reply Kristen Batdorf

Incredible Sara is it ok that I used this picture in a project I had to do for University?
- on September 13, 2011 at 6:16 pm | Reply Saurabh Gupta
  
  Thanks. Yes please.
  
  Regards, Saurabh Gupta